Feb 17 2008
DM Copy – From Headlines to your P.S.
DM Copywriting
Improving Response: From Headlines to Your P.S.
When writing Direct Mail (DM) copy, there are a few necessary steps to making sure you’re writing compelling copy, effective copy, and copy that drives your audience to take the action you want them to take. Following a guideline each and every time will ensure you’re going at it in the right way, and maximizing your DM ROI.
1. KISS. Keep it simple stupid. Keep your offer and the language you use clear, compelling, and if you use industry-specific jargon, make sure it’s relevant.
2. Headlines. Your headline is responsible for approximately 75-80% of your response, so if you have a weak, ineffective headline, chances are you’re going to have a campaign that fails. Three things that make a good headline include:
a. Posing a question that your audience can’t help but want to answer
b. Telling your audience what they should do—people do what they’re told
c. A credible testimony from a subject matter expert of a competitor
3. Keep to the facts. Don’t make statements and declarations that you can’t back up. Make sure you’re able to deliver what you promise.
4. Benefits are key. Make sure your audience gets the benefits up front. The benefits are what’s important to your audience, and they need to see that before pretty much anything else.
5. Differentiate. Make sure your audience knows why you’re better than your competition—be it better services, products, etc.
6. Test your copy. One DM piece does not an effective campaign make. Test everything from the copy to the offer to the creative. And then test again.
7. Build your Brand. If nothing else, your brand should get stronger with each DM campaign.
8. Make it easy to say Yes. The more hurdles that you create in your copywriting, whether by accident or on purpose, the less response you’re going to get. Short lead generation forms are better than longer forms—but they’ll likely produce less qualified leads to your sales team.
9. Signatures and the P.S. are often the first place readers look at when they first come across a DM piece. The P.S. is where you can get a vital piece of information across, such as a final selling opportunity or where you highlight the offer, the order form, another testimonial, or state the contact information.
At Level2wo we follow strict copywriting guidelines to maximize your effectiveness, and to drive maximum response from your direct mail pieces. Give us a call or send us an email with your questions.